literature

My sin

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You've always been my sin,
ever since the first time
that i laid eyes on you.
I adress this to you
My love,
My everything,
that consumed my life with one look.
My soul was swallowed by your eyes,
I belonged to you,
from that moment
My sin.
I tried to run,
try to hide,
you asked me why?
I looked at you, tears streaming down
my checks,
one response I could find;
the love i feel for you,
is dangerous,
it consumes me, holds me tight
and never lets me go.
You held me tight, whispered in my ear
like soft wisps of the silent wind,
you simply said
the feelings I feel for you
are unbearable,
you have a hold of my soul,
my body, my mind.
I found myself going crazy for your love,
craving it, when i wasn't
around you,
I prayed on my knees for you,
but now your gone.
Forever lost in the worlds fabric of design,
lost in the threads.
I panicked the other day,
I thought i couldn't remember your face,
remember your smile.
As I started to cry, it appeared again,
I saw your smile
I heard your laugh
I smelt your fragrance
I even felt your touch
I remembered the taste of your lips
And I broke down crying again...
My sin
I don't really like this one, cause the repitition wasn't used as effectively as it could...

but i guess it's ok :slow:
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RedAngel13's avatar
I almost melted when I read this one! It's heart-breaking..hits home